Floating in love and anticipation
Knowing
that someday the gigantic cocoon i was in
would break free
and the soothing voice
murmuring from the heavens above
would teach me such things as
how to tie my shoes,
how to write a thank-you letter,
and how to hold a grieving person's hand.
She would show me
how to make "Better Than Sex" cake,
how to roll sock balls,
and how to make my own reservations.
She would know
how to braid my hair,
how to praise my successes,
and how to cushion my failures.
From inside my ocean,
i was certain
that she couldn't help but stay with me
Because her voice was all around me
And it was all i knew of safety,
of nourshment,
of bouyancy.
Today--and on fortunate days--
i get to see her face.
But inside, above, below and all around me
i always can hear
her voice.
This poem was written for Poet's United prompt #14 of "Water" and Sunday Scribblings prompt #230 of "Faith"
22 comments:
that was beautiful.....
*hugs*
How sweet. Mothers really are a special thing. i think I'm going to go and call mine
One voice that will never leave your minds eye. Always recognisable, and always there.
CJ xx
that is one voice we will always recognize i believe..nice mag!
Yes, mums do contribute so much to who we are, thank goodness! But a cake better than sex? I want the recipe! :-)
This beautiful poem brought me to tears....it is truly lovely Templeton. :-)
thoughts of mum always make me so sad ...
How sweet!
This is a stunning, gorgeous poem. I hope that you showed it to her. As one of the mother-starved, this touched something deep.
Congratulations on your recovery (I am looking at your little counters and things). Me too, sista. :-) And thanks for the visit and comment. I've told the doorman to let you in anytime. ;-)
That is really beautiful! :-)
Just so very lovely ... beautiful!
Beautiful!
Pamela
What a beautiful tribute to your mom. Thank's for sharing. New follower here. Onreeone (Angie)at One Day At A Time...
What a touchingly beautiful poem. I hope someday my youngest daughter thinks of me this fondly. Right now, being a teenager, she pretty much just hates me. ;)
what a lovely tribute to your mother... no one quite as special :)
Beautiful.. and a mother's voice is one we never do forget!
What a gorgeous celebration of a mother's (and daughter's) love. Just beautiful!
:-)
Traci
Templeton,
Sorry for the late comment.
What a beautiful tribute to your mother. Brimming over with love.....
I really do miss my mother so much.
Best wishes,
Eileen
what a great poem for yours and every mother. Thanks
this is really nice.
Simply Beautiful!
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love your talent, hope to see you in.
old poems work fine.
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