Monday, October 11, 2010

Fairytale Revisited

The following prompt is for Poet's United Thursday's Think TankThe topic was complaints/grumbings.  I just so happen to be overflowing with material!

The prince is late.
This castle ledge is getting moldy.
My silken hair is getting split ends up here
and the glaring sun is doing nothing for my agelines.

Ominous crows circle at eyelevel
Thinking i must be a madwoman
for a charming voice from below
that bellows i will be saved,
at last.


She said...

cute...good to see you back, was wondering where you have been.

Old Ollie said...

Last week was fires and week - who knows? Nice poem indeed.

The Square Corner said...

You are good. Glad I discovered you. Powerful words, for certain.

Susannah said...

Oooh, I love this! Nice writing. :-)

Jingle said...

fairy tale, yet very gentle and hopeful,
lovely poem!

anne h said...

Been there - done that!
The ravens finally got me
So I had to do what your sidebar suggests -
Recover or die!
Back to being a Scarecrow!

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

I think many of us can get in line with this one ... I can so relate.