Today I found myself
pulling one of your letters
from the dusty shoebox
hiding behind wrapping paper and old yearbooks.
Slowly
Under the swinging lightbulb
I ran my fingers over the aged ink
gently--ever so gently
In the moment I was touching you
for the crease of the paper
was the ridge under your nose
and i traced it seductively
all the way to the edge...
Staring in between the letters
I saw us dancing--
our shapes twisting in rhythm
to the rise and fall of the words
once again
To me,
this paper will always smell
of time and regret:
of moments captured and caged,
forever.
Where are you now?
I think you would be amused to know
that our memories
live, trapped, in a shoebox
in my closet.
The following poem is a submission to Jingle's POetry Potluck. Thanks for reading a have a great week!
19 comments:
Outstanding distillation of curiosity and nostalgia. Great last line about the shoebox. Thanks for sharing.
Here is my submission: http://notatameblog.wordpress.com/2010/08/10/zygote/
I like, I like, I liiiiiiiiike :) totally! really nicely done, thank you for sharing :)
fabulous...
Thanks for sharing with potluck.
templeton,
A beautiful recollection of memories.
Nicely done.
Pamela
I really loved this. Yes, the memories we keep stored in closets and boxes.
oh, how I comprehend this one... the keeper of all letters... I'll sale and get rid of everything in life, but the letters... they always keep safe with me :)
Great post!
.... Actually..... now that I think about it.... it's kind of sad, because the new generation, they wont have that keepsake.... aww....
goes to show, write a letter. :)
you captured your thoughts beautifully..
That is beautiful! I am so enjoying your writing. :-)
hey...that's SWEET, wow.., i could really feel it =)
great piece. made me think of my own stash of correspondence... wonderful job!
This is breathtaking Templeton....i love love love this poem!
please claim award and treats from my entry #160,
week 10 potluck...
Glad to see you shine and share.
see you next week.
Cheers.
Its beautiful.. as well as poignant. I enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing..
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Gorgeous with powerful imagery and these lines just flip me out -
"this paper will always smell
of time and regret:"
A stunning piece
So tenderly sweet, if there is such a thing .. brought tears to these old tired eyes ... for I have grandchildren in the military, and I can imagine what their wives are feeling. Thank you for this, beautiful and creatively written, to say the least.
elegant....
this was so sweet, i can feel the regret. we all wish we could go back in time sometimes...
my entry:
http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2010/11/15/sonnet-i/
Shoeboxes and mamories often go together...
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