The following poem was written for Magpie Tales, a weekly photoprompt.
Creation on fire;
a symphony of color
playing a tune
that for a moment
drowns out humanity,
making us stop
in our tiny mammalian tracks.
Suddenly--
Hearts on fire
we must bow to a Higher Power
that allows us to sing along,
becoming
part of the chorus
of the eternal
18 comments:
Where've you been, girl?
There is something about fall that makes one wonder what's behind it all.
Creation on fire ... I luv that line, as I do all things autumn.
Ditto Kathi, love this poem, I am feeling it in my bones....nice magpie
It is autumn where I am, so that's what I thought of first: "Creation on Fire". Darn good poem.
The chorus of the eternal. I love that.
Love this!
Find myself sing along with Buffalo Springfield...Stop, Children..what's that sound?...
Wow! This is just glorious, every single word of it! I love it. :-)
This is amazing!...Oh how we have missed you so!!!! So glad that you are back! :-)
profound tale.
I can't even comment on just one line because they are all wonderful.
oh yeah, singing along...wonderful write...happy one shot!
Oh, beautiful!
Can smell the autumn fire as I read your poem and process the imagery. Cool Magpie. Thanks for linking up with One Shot!
Great poem. Autumn is a powerful time of year. =)
"Chorus of the eternal" is an interesting phrase.
Nice One Shot!
oh yeah!
wow. likey.
thanks for sharing.
todd
Good flow.
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