(Side of the highway on a winter’s night.)
Wrinkly hands tapped ash out of the driver’s side window of the old Chevy truck.
Grace had pulled over to the shoulder of the road and stopped the engine, listening.
The song.
The one that had been played at the school recital oh so many years ago.
She recalled it had just started playing when he sat down on a folding chair next to her. A stranger, then.
Deep inside, however, she had known there would be no more empty chairs next to her ever again.
Now, years later, it was just a song on the radio--played for the masses.
Grace thought angrily to him, "You can never be condensed to lyrics of a song . They do not express the curve of your smile, the movement of your hands, the depth of our lifetimes...You saw my most sacred moments. How is it I must now know them alone?”
Suddenly
A gust of wind came and snow blew silently through her open window, covering the empty seat beside her.
And she knew the chair wasn't empty.
Of course it wasn't.
15 comments:
lovely piece, I often wonder this when a special song comes on or a coincidence is too in-my-face ... we are all connected, even the ones that have died.
best,
MOV
love never ending. :)
Chills. well done.
So lovely. Really enjoyed this one. We all see reassurances that we're not alone.
Beautifully done.
Great take on the prompt...I like that the chair wasn't empty ~
A cold absence filled by cold snow. Beautiful.
It's nice to know that we are never alone.
Oh, I so love this........love that the seat beside her wasnt empty after all.
Lovely story; it holds and causes me to want to know her better. It could become longer.
vivid piece...
keep up the excellence.
Poor Grace. But of course he's still with her. Nicely done!
I loved the eerie conclusion and her frustrated demand of the dead.
So haunting. The remembrance. the last part gives me a chill. (In a good way.)
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