From the picture
one cannot envision that night
when she drowned her infant in the bathtub
and ran, dripping, to slit the dog's throat
in the backyard while drenched in moonlight
and dancing
Guilty droplets of water spinning off her like a top,
long hair flying in ropes that, from a distance,
blended perfectly with the howling branches of the birch trees
one cannot hear her shrill cackle
taunting the various gods of the night sky
that they should not have challenged her so
perceiving weakness
because the taste of blood was in her mouth
and who were they to tell her of
demons and descendants
The following was written for the photoprompt provided by Magpie Tales.
15 comments:
evocative portrait of a troubled soul--well done!
Very dark and frightening you really can't judge people by their looks! Great job =)
eerie! and who really knows what she was all about? great use of the prompt.
Hey! Hey! This is a fabulous piece - deliciously dark. Talk about looks deceiving us!
Intensity we can see, yes, but such horror... no. But it happens! Very thought provoking!
Wow! Love the expression in this piece. You have captured the dark pains oh so well. Lending a glimpse of what, who, how this happens.
Very dark and eerie and very good.
Anna :o]
Oooooooooh!!!!!!!! Creepy! This one really gave me the shudders.
A nice haunting write, great word play too.
awesome poem..........nice blog.......
REGARDS
NAVEEN SOLANKI
http://drnaveenkumarsolanki.blogspot.com/
Wonderful imagery and finely tuned phrasing make this a memorable read. Provocative and powerful.
Most excellent! I love this! Deliciously creepy.
sad, creepy,
beautiful.
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this is a gripping poem. and sadly, there are many women who feel the need to end the life of their child/ children because of the demons in their heads.
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Happy July 4TH!
another fabulous write.
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